hi everyone i am getting ready to send everything to my wife for her spouse visa app

[Steve.r]

Overkill.... simplify it. I never read it all as I fell asleep. It's a bit Mills & Boon

I really dont think they need such a detailed account, keep to the facts, times, dates etc etc

Maybe bullet point flights, hotels, meetings, the real important stuff. I dont need to know what you had for breakfast or if it was raining on the second day or romantic strolls on the beach.

Don't get me wrong, it is a great story of love, but I think too much.

And as Lastlid says, make sure you use proper grammar, capitals and full stops.

[Rosie1958]

Overkill.... simplify it. I never read it all as I fell asleep. It's a bit Mills & Boon

I really dont think they need such a detailed account, keep to the facts, times, dates etc etc

Maybe bullet point flights, hotels, meetings, the real important stuff. I dont need to know what you had for breakfast or if it was raining on the second day or romantic strolls on the beach.

Don't get me wrong, it is a great story of love, but I think too much.

And as Lastlid says, make sure you use proper grammar, capitals and full stops.

I was thinking exactly the same as Steve and didn't finish reading it either. An important point to remember is that the officials that view the applications see so many and are really only interested in the facts. Submiting so much detail could end up with important facts being ignored. (I know when I receive very long CVs for job applications I always bin them.) Good luck with your application