Kindly asking for advice/input for my Employment letter.

[iamiyah]

Hoping for some help and advice that may help my application. Mr. Arthur i hope for your expert advise.

[Arthur Little]

Hoping for some help and advice that may help my application. Mr. Arthur i hope for your expert advise

... much as I would like to be able to help you, I am not, unfortunately, an "authority" on Visit Visas - aside from my awareness of how difficult they are to obtain (as I have twice indicated on your profile page) - so, in the circumstances, I'd respectfully suggest that, for the best possible outcome, you follow Terpe's guidance, #2 ... in conjuction with the sample template (mentioned in #4 & #7 and backed up by jta) provided by Mrs Smith.

Once again ... Goodluck!